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苍梧诗集----胡灵 [复制链接]

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只看该作者 10 发表于: 2017-10-16


                                                       钗头凤
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桃花脸,琉璃盏,满席芳黛欢声远。光阴残,青丝染,一盅红酒,饮干思念,算!算!  算!

秋潭目,玲珑步,梦中曾遇千千度。朱门阔,寒门落,初情虽在,镜花湖月,错!错!错 !



只看该作者 11 发表于: 2018-02-26
                                                                        中华 新韵
                                                                  
                                                                        《  江城子》
                                                                    
                                                                            伤   情

                                                          

                                                                  一生难忘少时愁,
                                                                  象春江,
                                                                  去还留。  
                                                                  泪润睫眸,
                                                                  心似冷霜揉。
                                                                  暗 系千结如问道?
                                                                  低垂首,
                                                                  语还休。

                                                                  几番梦遇故人游,
                                                                  旧时妆,
                                                                  笑含羞,
                                                                  欲诉柔肠,
                                                                  忽自立荒丘。
                                                                  泪眼醒观窗外事,
                                                                  天镜照,
                                                                  正寒秋。
                                                                  

只看该作者 12 发表于: 2018-02-28
版主,请把本栏目里的7楼、8楼和本恢复一起删掉

只看该作者 13 发表于: 2019-08-06
                                                          江城子
                                                 《庆八一思军旅》
                                                           胡灵

   寒窗读罢入军营。少年情,慕功名,演武堂前,时刻盼提兵。为教铁舟如利箭,研技艺,伴星明。

   三十戎马踏波行。破云屏,过东瀛,仿勒燕然 , 几度下南庭。会驾蛟龙穿巨浪,头沥沥,体泠泠。

注①破云屏,过东瀛:   冲破层层云雾屏障,穿过日本海峡。
②仿勒燕然:  效仿东汉大将军窦宪打败匈奴后在外蒙的燕然山(今叫杭爱山)勒石记功的壮举。
③几度下南庭:  指几次巡航到南海周边国家




只看该作者 14 发表于: 2019-08-07
   中华 新韵

                                                                        《  江城子》

                                                                            伤   情



                                                                  一生难忘少年愁,
                                                                  似江流,
                                                                  几时休。  
                                                                  常润睫眸,
                                                                  心似冷霜揉。
                                                                  暗 隐千结恐问道
                                                                  低垂首
                                                                  语含羞

                                                                  几番梦遇故人游,,
                                                                  眉如柳
                                                                  妆无修,
                                                                  欲诉柔肠,
                                                                  忽自伫荒丘。
                                                                  泪目醒观窗外事,
                                                                  天镜照,
                                                                  正寒秋。





只看该作者 15 发表于: 2019-08-19
                                                                     满 庭  芳                     
             《 春日伤怀》
                                                               日月轮袭,人生几许?又经秋叶春葩。百年刚半,青鬓早霜华。多少匆匆往事,成烟靄,荣辱由它。 叹年少,谁能得意,潘岳伴娇娃?

      非夸。今道是,青春戎马,知命还家,倦江海飘零,饮尽风沙。孤旅天緣何处,凭谁问,枫落云涯?可怜我,依稀梦里,都是旧时花。*

只看该作者 16 发表于: 2021-08-24
挺好的,一般不用删。有更满意的修改稿件重新发一下,注明是哪一篇的修改稿件就行。
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